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:iconrichardhayes:
That is a beautiful picture. May I make one suggestion? I (and many others) read everything from left to right because that is how I was taught to read and I "read" your picture from left to right and got stuck on the left by the beauty of those clouds. I only noticed the subtle right hand side much later. If you were to mirror the image the eye would then move from left to right as usual, but it would start with the subtle dark purple and end up with the brilliant golds. Your picture "Tomorrow Begins" reads from left to right and is better for it.

This critique assumes that you and your target audience read from left to right. If you read from right to left, then all you need do is look at your target audience and decide which is more important. :-)
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poisen2014 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
Clap Clap 
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:bow:
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:iconpoisen2014:
poisen2014 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
my pleasure Nod 
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angelichope Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
I think this is a lovely sight.:dance:
At exactly what time does the sky look like this, btw?
A good photo, and I imagine the real thing must have been breathtaking!:) 
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank youse so much! :D
And it was taken probably around evening or so :)
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:iconangelichope:
angelichope Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Welcome!!!:)
Alright, thank you!!!:)
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:icontayakabi:
TayaKabi Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thanks for taking part in filling my group Photoarea
This excellent photo has been moved to folder "Skyscapes".
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime and thanks a bunch! :)
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:iconjohn-peter:
John-Peter Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful title and lovely sky! I like the colors here, and the black silhouettes here are gorgeous :)
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much amigo :D
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:iconjohn-peter:
John-Peter Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
De nada! You're welcome :D
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:iconditie:
Ditie Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
WOW!  This is......  WOW!
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:bow:
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:iconditie:
Ditie Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
:-)
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:iconheatheredierks:
HeatherEDierks Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh my gosh this is amazing! I love it soo much!! 
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :D
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Retro-Red Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing shot, you just caught a one of kind shit! This moment is beautiful! You have a lot of amazing shots, I'm watching :)
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a bunch fer them! :)
Hope ya could see more soon! :)
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:iconretro-red:
Retro-Red Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha I'll definitely check them out whenever I have time, I just realized I typed shit instead of shot too....
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:iconxeckles:
xeckles Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
whoah @.@
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Like it?
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:iconxeckles:
xeckles Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
yes it's wonderful ^^ 
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :D
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:iconxeckles:
xeckles Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
you are most very very welcome <333 
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TeczowaCegla Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woow, it's amazing ;D
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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:iconteczowacegla:
TeczowaCegla Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's no problem :D
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:iconrichardhayes:
RichardHayes Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is a beautiful picture.
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a bunch :)
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:iconrichardhayes:
RichardHayes Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just keep on posting. Your stuff is great!
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:iconlactopi:
Lactopi Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa, those are some nice colors =O

Cool shot. I wish we had cool colors like that here once in a while at least...
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a bunch! :D
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:icondavzz16:
Davzz16 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, the depth, the colour!
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :D
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OfTheBlessed Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Beautiful sky scene.
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :D
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:iconoftheblessed:
OfTheBlessed Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Thanks for capturing so many scenes of the ever changing skies.
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime :)
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:iconoftheblessed:
OfTheBlessed Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
:)
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:iconjaq27:
jaq27 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful vibrant colours in this capture. You've got a superb set of sunset pictures as well.
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a bunch :D
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:iconcyklopi:
Cyklopi Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
it's amazing!
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :D
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:iconjohn-ancor:
john-ancor Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
amazing, the sky has so meny faces
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad ya like it.
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SearingBlaze000 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i actually thought it was a lightning storm you'd captured - it's electrifying to look at and sends shivers down the spine... amazing :)
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NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank youse so much. :)
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SearingBlaze000 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
my pleasure ;)
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YasamanHajian Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay wow with this one feautured on deviantARTs front page you got a new subscriber and a Llama. This is amazing! *o*
Have to look at your other ones as well now :D
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:iconnovaheroi:
NovaHeroi Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much! :thanks:
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